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Your point is so convoluted and excessively long that the only thing I got after reading it twice was that you’re extremely critical of a first build that has a ton of depth to it.  You’re essentially telling him if his “dateable” characters don’t fit the mold of what you specifically, or as you say “humans” like, then the game is bad.  I couldn’t disagree more, he said it was mostly linear, let him tell the story try to make your criticism more constructive.